Reflects a Mirage

a wave of heat hits radiates over the ground reflects a mirage
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 7:15 PM
I can imagine this one seeming like glass in a desert!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 4:00 PM
Very well done, Rusty! Perfect 575 meter with superb imagery. Best wishes, Keith
Horne Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 8:46 AM
clever haiku, Russell
Pettit Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 10:18 PM
Most of the mirages I see are those of puddles on the road ahead. It's amazing how they disappear when you get closer. Good write as usual.
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