Reflections Over a Cup of Soup Ii

‘Tis many days since I have joined this cyber family,
some even say my old poems suck, to that I may agree.
I struggled then to free my muse to speak more fluently;
What got me through, an eager heart to learn with constancy.

As I reached out with every poem they welcomed me like most
kindhearted ones that read my page and leave comments on posts.
I do believe without these men and women who comment
I would have stopped posting the poems, full of angst and lament.

They all are there, day in, day out, my cyber family.
Some are parents, brothers, sisters, some are still like babies
We laugh, we cry, we disagree but make up the next day,
send notes to friends when they’re absent and then for them we pray.

Though now I still am far from great this thing I learned, I’ll share:
People will care ‘about what you think when they think that you care.
Allow me then to say my thanks, my deep appreciation
For stopping by, for your replies and all the inspiration.






21 July 2015
My Cyber Family Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose

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Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Goodie, I found one to read!!! Sometimes I struggle to find poems to read when I have read a lot of someone's stuff. If you have some poems you really love, let me know. I would enjoy reading the things you wrote that you think are your best. This, for example, is so nice, Kim. And it is a poem to make us feel good inside.
Inman Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 5:29 PM
What is great? I certainly like your poems! Makes it great to me.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:19 AM
Awesome pen n tender words Kim! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!
Laurie Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:06 PM
G'day Kim... if we all keep encouraging each other Kim, we keep writing and posting and who knows what written treasures lie ahead of us, as well as what friendships will be forever. An inspiring poem Kim - thank you once again - Lindsay
Duggan Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Kim my dear I do not know much about poetry so I cannot criticize but what I have seen of your poems they are brilliant. congrat's on winning this contest you certainly deserve the win and honestly don't take any notice of anyone who is critical of your work they are only jealous, thanks for the SM will write later, take care my dear friend...........Vera...x......
Allison Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 5:35 PM
I think we can all relate to your wonderful words Kim - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Terry Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Congrats, Kim, for a well deserved win. I love your work and find you to be a very special person. You have always encouraged me with your comments. You have grown as a poet but stayed humble. I hope to follow your example. Best, Janece
A  Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Kim, congrats on your win. SKAT
Carter Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Beautifully said... Congratulations on your win! ~lee
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations again on your wonderful win . Hugs Eve
Williams Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Hi Kim,............how beautifully and accurately reflected on how so many Soup members feel as they go about their day to day life and writings. At times it is like having a large family,but with always a few special members. To a special lady, I thank you..........kind regards--------John
Lindley Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Great tribute poem to the members of the Soup. You must know your contributions inspire others to be better people, better poets and even humble. A gift you have and one many appreciate greatly. A7.
Y. Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Wow! Have you read something and said to yourself man I wish I wrote that? Kim kudos to you for expressing what it means to be apart of this community very well. Its people like you that make it a joy to be here. You have been supportive and encouraging to me several times. I thank you very much. Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis (7)
Callus Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 4:15 AM
Hi Kim! The mixture of people in this cyber family make it attractive and a lovely place to be in. People like you put a smile on our faces and are fun to have around. I admire your positive attitude and willingness to learn. Take care...hugs // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:05 AM
This is a perfect tribute to all of us at Soup who care! She is sure to love this entry. I sure did! Thank you my friend...Connie 7
Sathasivam Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 11:30 PM
this is one of the best I have seen in the contest, dear. You really captured the essence of SOUP with this gem.
Breidenthal Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 10:25 PM
Some are still like babies.... Hahaha awwww this is so sweet, Kim! I love to read your work, dear and I mean to explore some of your older poems posted on here as well. I doubt they suck! Anyway, your kindness and appreciation is so so inspiring. Poetry soup has always been a very supportive group, and you are by far one of the nicest and coolest people on the site! Always, Laura
Pinet Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Your words speak with the power of love and your mind set flows onto the page and we can reflect on the power of your message within our lives as a family of poets and friends. Emile.
Bailey Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 6:07 AM
Nicely done Kim. Love the fact that you just kept doing what you love. You are a wonderful writer. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Good luck with the contest. Reads like a winner:) Have a superb day my friend. Big Hugs "B"
Muideen Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 1:33 AM
You penned this piece wonderful and excellent, I love how you penned it, it seems like a winner to me..........A.M
Villarosa Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 11:25 PM
Great write, Kim. Outside your real family circle, someone came into a circle of friends not allied by blood but stay connected with each other to strengthen a family-like bonding. You will always go with extra touch and attention to be around with your cyber family. Good luck to you in this contest. 7 (^_^) Noel.
Roper Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 9:13 PM
Kim, a wonderful write you are a cheer in our life a 7 Hugs Eve
Trifiatis Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 5:41 PM
A full of warmth, care and humanity poem that springs out of a tender heart, Dear Kim. Certainly your poetry radiates love and concern for others qualities that we need at the soup. Good luck in the contest.
Delaney Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 4:26 PM
You have a beautiful spirit and I relate to all you have said.....one of your soup family now,,,lets give it a stir. Hugs, SuZ
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