Reflections of Love In Water Droplets

As the rain kisses the roses,
Leaving water droplets.
Reflections of their silver hair
As heads touch love's asset.

Time takes away youth's rich beauty.
The reflection reveals
A beauty deeper than youth's dreams_
Love for a liftime that's genteel.  

Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle
Contest: Reflections of Love
Written this 26th day of February 2013
A form of Poulter's Measure..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 1:56 PM
This is awesome Sara, ,,, here's to a top win ;} going to fav's ;}
Gasun Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 10:08 AM
An excellent poem and image here my dear friend Sara. A winning piece for me. I'll favorite this. Thank you so much and have a very wonderful day! love and big hugs, Leonora
Haick Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 9:12 PM
Just as Rachel said, Sara, Sooo very beautiful, even in its brevity, it says a whole lot! A beautiful entry for the contest, a Winner in my book! Love, Annalise
Zerbst Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 5:06 PM
Good idea, the reflections. It matches the mood of the poem. Very nice thoughts expressed.
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 4:58 PM
very lovely, Sara!
Manassian Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 2:11 PM
Beautiful, Sara...Beautiful! Hugs!
Jones Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 1:12 PM
Absolutely breathtaking
Williams Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:53 AM
Sara good image you portray...David
Jad Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:41 AM
Love is always eternal and youthful... It never ages!! Very sweet and loving poem..! All the best in the contest.
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