Reflections of Love

I kissed you in the tender light Of the voyuer moon upon a darkness When the quivering stars in night Laughs out in unfading gladness. I held you when the silent tears Of dew gathered softly in your eyes As we prowled in passionate cares Till the last light of moon dies. I watched you in pale and in fear When a thousand hells are upon you Yet I promise dear to chase the tear Come my love,I will fight for you. When woesome foes may creep To forever mute your living breath I'll arm your fears ever so deep And shield away this dreaded death. Faithless me oh never to believe That prayer had played its part This day I die within this dream In the colours of your heart!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/16/2013 5:16:00 PM
A very romantic poem of faithfulness! The beautiful flow of the words and the rhyme scheme, makes this a very enjoyable poem to read. Fantastic poetry!
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Date: 8/11/2013 7:34:00 AM
You are a romantic, an unbeatable combination when parred with poetic talent. Well done.
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:59:00 PM
A true beauty, Mustapha! Love your poems! Annalise
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Date: 8/4/2013 6:23:00 PM
lovely serenade. thank you for your kind reviews. :)
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Date: 8/2/2013 5:20:00 AM
all that a maiden wants is here Dearest M.M you excel Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/1/2013 9:12:00 PM
I will fight for you.....arm your fears...what a Knight in shining armor ...such a lovely poem
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Date: 8/1/2013 3:26:00 PM
- A beautiful poem about love Mustapha !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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Date: 8/1/2013 1:29:00 AM
colorful play with words you are a master Kaufman its a magical gift !
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Date: 7/30/2013 6:19:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL BRAVO ON THIS WRITE I didn't even mind the length good job.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 7:45:00 PM
Thank you Cherl for your kind review.
Date: 7/30/2013 2:16:00 PM
this is very pretty. I loved some of the lines. such as that one that Mystic rose really liked and the line about the quivering stars.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/1/2013 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your kind feedback on this one.Very much appreciated.
Date: 7/30/2013 11:17:00 AM
Ahhh!! Impressive work..Sooooo romantic and passionate..Enjoyed reading this one today..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/1/2013 1:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara for that ever so kind feedback.Much appreciated.
Date: 7/30/2013 10:22:00 AM
ohhh, i'm under your spell,mus...this is such a tender, gentle stufff!... wow..) huggs
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/1/2013 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette for such a kind feedback.
Date: 7/30/2013 9:21:00 AM
of love you write ever so lightly which makes it romantic, enjoyed this one, ~always, Linda
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/1/2013 1:26:00 PM
Thank you very much for that kind feedback Linda.Much appreciated.
Date: 7/30/2013 7:42:00 AM
Moving and romantic!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/1/2013 1:23:00 PM
Thank you very much Richard for that kind feedback.Much appreciated.
Date: 7/30/2013 7:33:00 AM
YOU ARE SO ROMANTIC! WOW! You should teach men how to be romantic.... :) Lovely poem, Mustapha. Also, I enjoyed Shadow's blog about you and your impact on her life. Lovely.............
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/1/2013 1:21:00 PM
Thanks for that ever so lovely feedback Eileen.Oh and thanks for reading Shadow's blog about me...smiles :)
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