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Written: June 15, 2023 She Dances Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise ________________________________________________________________ She dances with grace, a sight to behold She peers into the depths, to see a delightful face Looking back, a spark lit the night She glances at me, with a light-filled smile Beyond her shoulder, an ambrosian world unfolds, She poses in the mirror, a wave fits untold tales .

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Date: 6/16/2023 2:35:00 AM
Lavish and impressive poem. A grand bitesize.
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Date: 6/15/2023 12:22:00 PM
Lasaad, your beautiful rhyme literally dances off of the page lifting me up in the depth of waltzing images and beautiful word choices - "ambrosian!" A romantic moment held in time by your amazing lines. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings my friend.
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Date: 6/15/2023 10:41:00 AM
To receive the smile of such of dancing beauty would be a moment anyone would value. Lasaad, your poetry is reaching new heights.
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