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(excerpt from a song I wrote a long time ago) A loneliness remains inside my soul Where your spirit flows nobody knows Fantasies and illusions ease the pain But nothing in this lifetime will stop the rain Pictures of your smile reel through my mind But sometimes it seems your face is hard to find The details of an angel are slowly fading away But the echoes of your voice will always serenade In my heart, in my soul, Is this moment surreal or was it the life when you were here? Promise I’ll never forget; I’ll always keep you near. A new journey with different paths, so many miles of a different sky Leaves me wondering, without you, who am I?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/20/2012 3:01:00 AM
Deep and moving is this write..love it! Jag
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 10/11/2012 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, Jag!
Date: 8/30/2012 11:13:00 PM
If this is part of a song you wrote, I would like to see the rest of the lyrics. This is a good write.
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Robert Pettit
Date: 8/30/2012 11:15:00 PM
Why didn't this one look familiar to me? I see I commented on this one before in almost the same words.
Date: 7/28/2012 5:55:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..Yes, a soul can be lonely in a room full of people..Sad but truth..Sara
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 8/30/2012 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 7/27/2012 8:19:00 AM
Very nice...TAH
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 8/30/2012 6:46:00 PM
Thanks, Tobey!
Date: 7/22/2012 10:01:00 PM
If this is just a portion of your song, then I would love to read the rest of the lyrics. This appears to be well-written.
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 8/30/2012 6:46:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 7/18/2012 9:03:00 PM
Excellente' Brandi...loving it, your words are coming straight from the heart. One love Joy Wells.
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/19/2012 7:18:00 AM
Thank you, Joy!
Date: 7/17/2012 11:40:00 PM
beautiful words of deep intense emotion.. loss of a loved one is never easy to cope with but to know we will see that soul again is comforting .. nicely penned luv..
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/18/2012 8:47:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I agree =)
Date: 7/17/2012 10:21:00 PM
Very nicely written...Love this
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/18/2012 8:45:00 PM
Thanks, Kelsey!
Date: 7/17/2012 9:27:00 PM
I tried singing it,great song,great poem,great write Brandi
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/17/2012 9:47:00 PM
lol..thanks Richard! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/13/2012 6:21:00 AM
Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Brandi. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/13/2012 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, Carol! See you Monday.
Date: 7/12/2012 8:49:00 PM
loved it, a beautiful gift within you flows throughout giving light
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/13/2012 8:45:00 PM
Thank you, Stephan!
Date: 7/12/2012 1:27:00 PM
Brandi....it is good...well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Brandi Simpson
Date: 7/13/2012 8:45:00 PM
Thank you, Anne!

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