Reflections

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Wrinkles in the wind. Changes your perception of things. What you see isn’t what others perceived. With every rain drop that falls another tear drop rolls down your cheek. Wishing you were someone else while waiting to be understood. Your soul seeps into a watery abyss with every wrinkle in the wind another reflection it brings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Croy Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 9:52 AM
I really like this one... and i can relate.... very open minded and It digs down deep and has a message for the people who feel this way too.
Horsman Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 2:54 PM
awesome cory, so profound, congrats on contest winner. harry
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 5:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's "Mirror" contest Cory. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 1:21 AM
Congratulations x
Dillard Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 10:27 PM
Congratulations to you Cory. Continued good luck to you! RAY
Song Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 7:47 PM
I love the 5th and 6th lines so much...the entire poem is so transparent of the writer...a very special poem that shines amongst the others. Congrats congrats congrats, Cory. Gwendolen
Caliri Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Congrats on 6th place in my mirror contest! I liked the ending to this.
Green Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 6:47 PM
deep and sweet poem.....
Deane Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 5:58 AM
Hi Cory...stopped by quick before the boys start getting in my hair...too late here he comes...this one's decided he's going to figure out how to turn the door knobs now...great now I have two escapees...sneaky boys...gotta go luv...back in a bit...luv shannon
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 11:18 AM
This is a very interesting one. Unusual imagery. I quite like that line about every wrinkle in the wind. Hi there, Cory and a happy thanksgiving to you. Hubbie left CA at midnight and we will be eating in late afternoon! Luv, Andrea
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November 23, 2011 at 5:18 PM
This is a wonderful write my dear Cory... An insight into the poet and person your are... Happy ThanksGiving !!! love Michael
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