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Reflections

My dreams are bright feather light at night conditions right Carefree Mind free Life's challenges to be won Feeling warmth from noonday sun I dream of water floating boating with Dad Sparkle Lake water ripples Lost Dad Double nickels Still sad Memory trickles I dream of sky Fly High Cropduster Single prop Big John Name drop Macho swagger Li’l Baby Taildragger I dream in hues greens, blues Love so true dancing with you Faces aglow manhattans flow Bummer— Need a drummer Low-rent venues party continues I dream less bright feather light at night conditions right Carefree Mind free As when I was young Colder now in the setting sun
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Spence Sr Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 3:47 AM
Great poem. Dreams are always incredible. Some good and others not so good. I like it. Blessings always!
Toney Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 10:02 AM
It is so much better when we dream! I appreciate your stopping by, Joseph.
Goff Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 6:27 PM
Truly a kaleidoscope of life's images in colors & brief bursts of hardships & memories...lightly displayed, deeply written Mark, good work!
Toney Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, James. You’ve made my day!
Sands Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Very well written Mark.! I hope all is well :)
Toney Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Thanks, Heidi. All is well. I hope all is well with you and yours!
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