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No AI, ChatGPT, machine learning (ML), etc., was used in the composition of this poem.

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This is an entry in Sara Kendrick's "Reflection(s) on Childhood Day(s)" poetry contest.

Reflection on Childhood Days at Community Creek_SK

Years ago, when my friends and I were just boys;
A nearby place provided such simple joys.
To us, it was one of the best local ‘finds’;
“Let’s go to the creek,” never far from our minds.

We usually rode bikes, although sometimes we’d run;
To be first to arrive was part of the fun.
Visiting each favorite spot with made-up names;
Racing leaf and twig boats, playing other games.

Covering stones with mud, shouting “Bombs away!”
Vying for biggest ‘explosion’ of the day.
Pretending that large rocks were islands mid stream;
For hours we’d play in a quasi day dream.

Imagining that millimeters were miles;
Jumping from the creek’s banks to ‘fly’ to warm isles.
When dusk called us home as it did way too fast;
We knew today’s trip here would not be our last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 3:26 PM
Way to go on your placement in my contest. I enjoyed reading your work. Sorry so late with coming by with this congratulations on your win. Sara K. 👏✍️
Williams Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 7:51 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, both for sponsoring the contest and for your congratulations!! I had fun with this one, and every word of my poem is true - some youthful boyhood memories! (In so many ways, I really miss those days...). Thanks, again. Blessings & very best to you always! :) Bartholomew
Goldsmith Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 1:32 PM
WOW!!! What a creative/fun write with fun pictures you have here. Love This... Sounds like you had a ton of fun. "Good Luck." I did "Reflections On My Childhood In The Hospital." Have a fun day writing away...........
Williams Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:25 PM
Paula, thank you for your nice, encouraging remarks, as usual! I appreciate you. I will be rooting for you and your poem to achieve a podium placement in Sara's contest. Blessings and very best, my friend! Bartholomew
Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2026 at 10:16 PM
You described so well the creativity of children, especially boys playing war. I even took part in that. When we built forts in the woods! I loved those times. Great nostalgic writing 😄
Williams Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 9:30 AM
Hi Andrea, and thank you for your super-kind comments! I am with you - we played at and in the creek, made forts, played 'battle' games, and even blazed a trail through the woods one time for hiking and riding bikes single-file! Those were the days... Thanks for sharing your memories, too! :) Blessings & very best, Bartholomew
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