Reflection

Looking in the mirror the painful truth I see. I can't believe the man I am is looking back at me. How many carefree moments Hide behind those eyes? How many brokenhearted nights does that subtle smile disguise? Mirror, hanging on the wall, not even you reflect it all. As I look at you, do I really see the man who lives inside of me? Unforgotten pages of verse from long ago are not reflected in the gaze as cold as winter snow. I see a bitter teardrop that tells me I can't win. And I question not where tears begin but, just where do they end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 7, 2013 at 11:06 AM
CONGRATS!! in the mirror contest.... Linda
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July 7, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Thank you PD... You're a pleasure to do business with... Jake
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July 2, 2013 at 8:16 AM
John a fabulous reflections of one's self . Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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July 2, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Thank you, Connie. You're an encouraging friend and I really value your comments..... Jake
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July 1, 2013 at 8:03 PM
John, congrats in Nathan's MIRROR contest............... have yourself a sweet day............ SKAT
Posey Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 1:28 AM
SKAT, You are, indeed, the bearer of good news.... Love ya!..... Jake
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June 30, 2013 at 3:07 PM
Well done on the win John, and thanks for your comments..'
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July 2, 2013 at 1:27 AM
Thank you, Joe, your visits are appreciated.... Jake
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June 29, 2013 at 4:59 PM
interesting, CONGRATS!
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June 29, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, friend, for your visit...Jake
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May 21, 2013 at 7:20 PM
thanks for suggesting that i read this,
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May 21, 2013 at 8:53 PM
Thank You for your visit.... Jake
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April 24, 2013 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations John, hope you will never again need to write a poem that sad. Remember you have us to talk to through writing, be happy life is beautiful.Love Terry
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April 24, 2013 at 6:30 PM
Thanks Terry, This was written from pure imagination. Years ago I wrote "A Look At Myself". That describes better what I see in myself.... Love ya much....... Jake
Jones Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 5:30 PM
Hey....glad to see you here among the winners...congratulations
Posey Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Thanks dearest, "A Look At Myself" is more about me...... Hugs to ya..... Jake
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April 22, 2013 at 6:38 PM
John , :-) congratulations with your awesome "SELF PORTRAIT" poem. Take Care ~ PD
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April 24, 2013 at 6:37 PM
PD, Thanks for the appreciated kudos. "A Look At Myself" is probably not as dramatic poem, but more like me..... Hugs to ya.... Jake
Jones Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 5:06 PM
Wow they are somewhat similar. I guess most of us truth be told don't really like what we see in the mirror sometimes. Blessings
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January 20, 2013 at 11:39 AM
Wow! Thanks for referring me to this! It is so full of emotions and so deep! A wonderful write! :)
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November 5, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Love how well you script your reflection! Enjoyed this much. Good luck if for contest. :) Tanya
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