Reflection

Today I sat by the lake...
The waters reflecting
each and everything
including me................
For a moment I felt
my reflection was my soul...
Full of waves
unclear and disturbed....
Trying to find myself
in those disturbed waters
I looked and looked for me
Then with a hope I got up
Someday I will be back here
Someday the  waters would be still
and my reflection would be clear....
I hope!!!
I hope!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gildersleeve Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Water in motion, its reflections are still evident but are fractured into wiggly lines that distorts your image. But still water can be difficult to see what is reality and what is reflection. Irfana it's an expressive write. Thank you for sharing, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 5:48 PM
this is a wonderful reflective poem better than mine!! and I bet it does well in the contest.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 10:00 AM
Hello again, I wrote another poem which this one has inspired. I hope you will enjoy. Have a great weekend.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 9:10 AM
Water is one of the most amazing elements on earth, soft to the touch yet powerful beyond imagination. I am glad your soul is water and I am happy to have your words soak into my heart. Well done
Guzzi Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 2:09 PM
Good entry! we change so much it really doesn't matter what we look like..it is who we are that matters ;) Light & Love
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