Reflection

Who is this person?
Wrinkled face and piercing eye
Show me character.

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Robert Pettit

September 5, 2012 at 10:40 PM

Congratulations on another win. In your second line, your word "pearcing" is correctly spelled "piercing". Why didn't any of the previous commenters catch that?

Andrea Dietrich

December 7, 2011 at 4:52 PM

Hey, glad to see you won big with this one! Congrats.

Carrie Richards

December 7, 2011 at 8:56 AM

So much contained, so much wisdom in so few words. You said it all, Ray. Well done! ps....a wonderful holiday to you and your family!

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 7, 2011 at 5:36 AM

Congratulations on your win in Matt's "Mirror" contest Ray. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 7, 2011 at 1:12 AM

Interesting. Congratulations on your win x

Gwendolen Song

December 6, 2011 at 2:02 PM

Power packed 3 lil lines, Ray....a wonderment of brevity!! Congrats congrats congrats..Gwendolen

Matt Caliri

December 6, 2011 at 1:20 PM

I like this haiku, the last line surprised me. Congrats on 2nd place in my mirror contest!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 2, 2011 at 11:37 PM

Yes, our wrinkles indeed can be a reflection of our character-- Thanks for sharing this Ray :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 28, 2011 at 10:31 PM

oh, and about your haiku, it's a nice "reflection" Let me check out one other of your recent ones I may not have seen yet.

Andrea Dietrich

November 28, 2011 at 10:30 PM

gosh, it's been forever! Where do you go to all the time, Ray? Are you keeping busy with poetry or just busy with all the other things in life? Xmas is coming way fast!!!! yikes.