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Reflection

Who is this person? Wrinkled face and piercing eye Show me character.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 9/5/2012 10:40:00 PM

Congratulations on another win. In your second line, your word "pearcing" is correctly spelled "piercing". Why didn't any of the previous commenters catch that?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2011 4:52:00 PM

Hey, glad to see you won big with this one! Congrats.

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/7/2011 8:56:00 AM

So much contained, so much wisdom in so few words. You said it all, Ray. Well done! ps....a wonderful holiday to you and your family!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Matt's "Mirror" contest Ray. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/7/2011 1:12:00 AM

Interesting. Congratulations on your win x

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/6/2011 2:02:00 PM

Power packed 3 lil lines, Ray....a wonderment of brevity!! Congrats congrats congrats..Gwendolen

Matt Caliri

Date: 12/6/2011 1:20:00 PM

I like this haiku, the last line surprised me. Congrats on 2nd place in my mirror contest!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/2/2011 11:37:00 PM

Yes, our wrinkles indeed can be a reflection of our character-- Thanks for sharing this Ray :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2011 10:31:00 PM

oh, and about your haiku, it's a nice "reflection" Let me check out one other of your recent ones I may not have seen yet.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2011 10:30:00 PM

gosh, it's been forever! Where do you go to all the time, Ray? Are you keeping busy with poetry or just busy with all the other things in life? Xmas is coming way fast!!!! yikes.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/26/2011 3:23:00 PM

Nice description from your view. Michael