Reflection

I look at my reflection; 
through the mirror;
dull gloomy eyes;
frowning;
messy hair;
dry lips;
shabby clothes;
slightly wrinkled face;
worn out self.
And 
Who is this young girl?
I’m seeing behind me;
holding my husband’s hand;
with a tiara on head;
wearing a white frock ;
with white veil;
holding fresh bunch of flowers;
Oh! That smile, spreads an aura of energy,
who is she?
framed in an old photograph;
from the bedside table;
turned toward me.

Wrote for Juxtaposition Poetry Contest
On 24 November 2020
Sponsored by Silent One

Placed 2nd in the contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/29/2020 11:02:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Juxtaposition contest, Rasitha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2020 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rasitha. Hugs Eve
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/28/2020 4:33:00 AM
Hi Eve, Thank you for visiting and commenting. Appreciate it. :), Rasitha
Date: 11/25/2020 10:07:00 AM
Hi Rasitha, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/25/2020 8:58:00 PM
Hi Alexis, Thank you for your lovely comment. Rasitha
Date: 11/25/2020 7:09:00 AM
Good idea for the contest, when we look back to our younger days.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/25/2020 9:35:00 AM
Dear Silent One, Your contest was a great muse. Should I prepared a bit more, the writing would have been more pleasurable for me . However I'm happy to have a placement. :)Rasitha
Date: 11/24/2020 9:44:00 AM
This is a beautifully painted self-reflective piece, Rasitha.
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/25/2020 9:29:00 AM
Dear Newton Arach, Thank you for your appreciation. Rasitha
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