Reflection

A face in water
Starring down the bright night stars
Challenging the moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fraser Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 2:26 PM
Leaves the reader much to think about here Abe, excellent Haiku>>James
Moreno Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 5:49 PM
This reminds me of a raging tide demolishing everything on its' surface. Though the stars and moon's reflection is on its' surface it can't hurt it, therefore the challenge.
Kittrell Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 10:20 AM
What's it mean? An angry man searching himself in the lake, maybe daring the universe? Interesting.
Edmonds Avatar
December 13, 2008 at 12:17 AM
Great thought and I think it relates to law enforcement! ~Caramel
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