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Reflection

A face in water Starring down the bright night stars Challenging the moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/11/2009 2:26:00 PM
Leaves the reader much to think about here Abe, excellent Haiku>>James
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Date: 12/21/2008 5:49:00 PM
This reminds me of a raging tide demolishing everything on its' surface. Though the stars and moon's reflection is on its' surface it can't hurt it, therefore the challenge.
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Date: 12/17/2008 10:20:00 AM
What's it mean? An angry man searching himself in the lake, maybe daring the universe? Interesting.
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Date: 12/13/2008 12:17:00 AM
Great thought and I think it relates to law enforcement! ~Caramel
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