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Author's Note: Palindromic Rictameter (or Rictamirror? lol) is the only way I can think to identify this; as it follows the rules of a Rictameter but also reads the same forward and back. It was not the goal but it definitely worked this under-challenged brain. I added two syllables in the center transition which is to be, or be related to, the title. FYI, it is a pain.
Reflecting
Love is
pain. Knew she that?
Now. Did it feelings change?
Did she learn? That, only time tells.
"Mirror, will I hate? Mirror... Heal I will!"
Mirror?
"Will I Heal? Mirror! ...hate I will!" Mirror
tells time only. That, learn she did.
Change feelings it did. Now
that she knew pain
is love.
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