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ripples of water torture accepted the wrinkle of time descending mannahly marantic romance torticollis dribs and drabs of syringe honey’d seeds remain; cakes fade away dawn will erase; placidity will forget but the depths release their seamonsters reflected in the honeymoon, between palms with firework stars overhead; eternal bliss 9/25/2020 Sponsor: William Kekaula Impact and Metaphors Poetry Contest *mannahly - mannah turned into an adverb

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Date: 10/3/2020 3:17:00 PM
Your words awoke me, Kim, thanks to introducing a host of them as I add to my dictionary, well-done, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thank you, William!
Date: 9/28/2020 11:07:00 AM
You always write with such dignity and bliss Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2020 1:25:00 PM
I appreciate you so much, Caren! <3
Date: 9/25/2020 12:34:00 PM
You seem to search for new words. Always good to learn. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2020 1:26:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! I love words!
Date: 9/25/2020 10:17:00 AM
When I read your poems they give me eternal bliss of day, Thank you for sharing winning wishes are being sent your way Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie :) Blessings!
Date: 9/25/2020 9:33:00 AM
Such a beautiful write, Kim. I love this. -Angela
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Angela!
Date: 9/25/2020 7:39:00 AM
A inspiration that enchants and touches the soul. God bless you sweet lady :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Regina! Hugs...Kim

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