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Reflected In the Honeymoon

ripples of water torture accepted
the wrinkle of time descending
mannahly marantic romance
torticollis dribs and drabs of syringe
honey’d seeds remain; cakes fade away
dawn will erase; placidity will forget
but the depths release their seamonsters
reflected in the honeymoon, between palms
with firework stars overhead; eternal bliss

9/25/2020
Sponsor: William Kekaula
Impact and Metaphors Poetry Contest

*mannahly - mannah turned into an adverb
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Your words awoke me, Kim, thanks to introducing a host of them as I add to my dictionary, well-done, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, William!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 11:07 AM
You always write with such dignity and bliss Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 1:25 PM
I appreciate you so much, Caren! <3
Buhagiar Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 12:34 PM
You seem to search for new words. Always good to learn. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 1:26 PM
Thank you, Victor! I love words!
Rose  Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 10:17 AM
When I read your poems they give me eternal bliss of day, Thank you for sharing winning wishes are being sent your way Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Pixie :) Blessings!
Crabtree Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 9:33 AM
Such a beautiful write, Kim. I love this. -Angela
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 9:46 AM
Thanks so much, Angela!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 7:39 AM
A inspiration that enchants and touches the soul. God bless you sweet lady :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Thanks so much, Regina! Hugs...Kim
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