Refining the Soul

A lifetime of disappointment
tempers an unrefined soul.
Sometimes the metal of rejection
forges a soft heart of gold.

The rock of unbending pride
erodes from the tears of despair.
In the mines of the flesh,
humility's jewels await to be found.

Veins of hope lay hidden
in the dark soil of fear.
Ores of the world's cold cares
supply the riches of sorrow.

Each discovered lode of emotion
is a treasure beyond value.
The coals of despair, pain, and sorrow
creates the diamond of the soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 10:41 PM
This one looks familiar to me too, but maybe I had not seen it before. I love the wisdom displayed in this poem. I see you do not post too often here. that's too bad! But you have been a member for a really long time!!
Palmer Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 4:35 PM
LOVELY,great write Angie
Johnson Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 7:25 PM
I like this one alot!!!!!!!
Grisetti Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 7:23 PM
A great simile, the earth and a human. I hope you have found your buried treasure.
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