James Edward Lee Sr. Poet Haiku

refining consciousness-A CHANGE OF HEART MINDSET-

 my thoughts turn around
unique feelings awareness
mind replacing lust
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thoughts sensations crossed
unwanted elements dross
mindset changed deemed such
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rectify soul new 
birth changed my heart posture soul
from sift to cleanse new
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rectify soul born 
refining my consciousness
from sift to cleanse new

Refining consciousness 
 Line of inquiry
instrumentalising mind, I rested thought
employing it only when needed
shifting to heart, I became self-taught
gentling touch, voice of conscience heeded

8/13/24
For refining consciousness Poetry Contest
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Poem Syllable Counter Results
Syllables Per Line:	5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5
Total # Syllables:	68
Total # Lines:	15  (Including empty lines)
Words with (syllables) counted programmatically:	 N/A
Total # Words:	47

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