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Refining Consciousness

I awoke Alone In a crowded field Budding potential Growing amidst Disillusionment. Tossed into the air Stung by the edges Of chaffs collusion Separated From all connection To whatever was Set adrift On what is ©5/3/2023

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Date: 5/6/2023 8:39:00 PM
Great growth in reality and realization and refining consciousness. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/5/2023 7:41:00 PM
The ambiguity of your final 2 lines is an apt end to the twists + turns of what's perceived as consciousness. I much admire concise, sharp poems that leave room for reflection. Congratulations! Brian
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John Lawless
Date: 5/6/2023 6:04:00 AM
sort of a reflection on being the "pebble" not the "ripples"
Date: 5/3/2023 6:24:00 PM
What it is... What it is... What it is... What is it? :) gw
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John Lawless
Date: 5/4/2023 4:51:00 AM
It is what it is until it isn't

Book: Shattered Sighs