Refining Consciousness

When my wayward mind is unsteady, unbound from the righteous roots of sanctified soul, the dislodging thrust of the negative sensitivity unleashes the base instincts to rush feral on sordid trail. Vanity, anger and greed, innately so compulsive, distort the ethos of my obdurate ego, condition the oblique vision to look selfishly at the world, as the insight turns into an opaque layer. Beneath the surface of the mortal wisdom, where my mind builds the edifice of ignoble desires, the damaging traits lead to the abyss of dark ignorance, I suffer wandering in the wilderness of barren life. Deflected from the path shown by the moral compass, I am sucked within the vortex of the vicious storm, that breaks me into disillusioned discarded debris, I then hear the divine voice of conscience. I perceive life as the epithet of unique acuity, the matchless construct of the divine elements, manifest magnificently with the heavenly essence, encompassing the trinity of body, mind and soul. Refined consciousness reveals the meaning of existence, as on the lighted pathway of the devout life I take the inward journey to the sacred sanctum of spiritualism to reach the ultimate destination of nirvana. _______________ April 26, 2023 Contest : Refining Consciousness Sponsored by : Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 5/4/2023 9:04:00 AM
lovely as always! beautifully written! All the best in the contest!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:38:00 PM
Thank you, Krish.
Date: 4/29/2023 10:17:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem. Command of vocabulary and imagination. A sure winner,
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jay for enjoying reading the poem.
Date: 4/26/2023 2:46:00 PM
Wow. Great vocabulary and introspection. Well written ! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi for your nice comments.
Date: 4/26/2023 9:09:00 AM
I enjoyed your wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:36:00 PM
Thank you, Paula.
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