Refining

Kindling
Cradle by wind
Morph into flames 
Crescending melody
unites both spirit and soul
Refining

Seasoned                                
Embers simmer 
Tempered cooling
Immutably alive
though silence overshadows
Quiescent
~*~

10/30/12
*For Nette's "View From A Vignette" Contest
Annalise Brigham

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/1/2012 10:29:00 AM
‡ I Am Not Certain If Its Myself Yourself Or This Beautiful Verse, Sweet Beautiful Annalise, But Their Is Something Sooo Capitivating In Beautiful Amid This Wonderful Moment. Refining One's Love And Love And True Love. Sweeter The Taste A Chalice, Red Wine. Sweet Kisses To You, Dipped In Love, Rachel *
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Date: 10/31/2012 3:31:00 PM
this is wonderful, Annalise..
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Date: 10/31/2012 3:50:00 AM
Wow!!Excellent.Nice to see you around again:)
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Audrey Haick
Date: 10/31/2012 1:06:00 PM
Hi Kash poet! Thank you. Your comments are always appreciated. Hope all is well.
Date: 10/30/2012 10:39:00 PM
This is beautiful Anna.All the very best for the contest.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 10/31/2012 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Tahera. How have you been?? It's good to find old favorites still here.
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