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Refined Love

REFINED LOVE My mother cossets me in her arms, I feel her heartbeat, call rehearsed - The heartache and absent charms, The drama of my spouse conversed. Beloved, by my bed, asleep in chair - Before, after, and in between, I cling to you for wont of care. On your shining armor I lean. My daughter’s visit...we are close. The pain radiates from my chest. Comfort of eyes and speech compose. But it’s in my prince’s arms of rest, Where i bury all my sorrows and fears. Fearsome in his loyalty and compassion, United by our wedlock, in oneness, he hears. All drama clears, replaced by undying passion. We all have heard, how opposites attract. Our bent cookie cutter pieces, form one heart. Imperfect, our love sweet, in conterminous fact. Hellfire entanglements, try and fail, to keep us apart. Love sparked in our hearts at first light. We rekindle the spark, stoked by absence Of malice, forgiveness, a lingering fight To stay in touch - to titillate unguarded sense. In the marriage bed all things reset. We climb into each other’s suits. Lingering doubts and spats, we forget. The aromatics of our love spring new shoots. 11/3/2017 Silent One’s Love Story Contest 1st place

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Date: 11/5/2017 8:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 11/5/2017 7:41:00 AM
Then it is even more beautiful Kim....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thank you so much xx
Date: 11/5/2017 7:09:00 AM
A beautiful love story, that sounds so real.. so maybe from personal experience? Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you for the win, Silent, and yes, from personal experience.
Date: 11/5/2017 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2017 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 11/3/2017 7:28:00 PM
Beautiful love story! Enduring and strong :) Good luck in the contest! Best, Judy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2017 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, Judy! <3
Date: 11/3/2017 12:32:00 PM
- It's about forgive ... give and get - Lovely poem, Kim - Best wishes in the contest ... and happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2017 12:39:00 PM
Have a blessed weekend as well! <3 Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/3/2017 9:05:00 AM
So many beautiful lines in this poem--well crafted story of love--best for a win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2017 9:17:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay! <3

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