Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

Reeling In Motion

I twist evermore past a cotillion of meteors
Spreading plumes across unknown rhythm;
A mad swivel with myself, thrilling my essence 
In a hanging motion of a dip…I find myself alone
on the floor; my hem gathering night’s stardust.

And the saxophonist gazes at me from afar, 
he smiles,
then disappears.


Dancing With Contest
Sponsor: Giorgo V.
by nette onclaud

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Shadow Hamilton July 18, 2013 at 12:36 PM great poem congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Bukang Liwayway July 18, 2013 at 1:39 AM fantastic poem..Feel myself dancing to the rhythm ..Congratulations on your grand win friend Nette. Cheers!!

Tahera Mannan July 17, 2013 at 10:33 PM Beautiful and melodious hun. Many warm congrats for this win.

Cecilia Macfarlane July 17, 2013 at 8:22 PM A magical dance of beauty. Wonderful write and win! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux July 17, 2013 at 5:40 PM This left me swwooning. Congratulations Nette.

Poet Destroyer A July 17, 2013 at 5:16 PM lovely in every way.... congrats... LINDA

Skat A July 17, 2013 at 3:57 PM Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~

Poet. Undertaker July 17, 2013 at 6:53 AM Its great to read. the dance, the affluence in words and a professional greatness. the right word to admire is "awesome".I say this powerfully "awesome"

Kim Merryman July 16, 2013 at 9:24 PM I love how this is filled with vibrant descriptive language! Congrats on your 1st place win, Nette! Love, Kim

Daver Austin June 30, 2013 at 8:08 AM Like, the charm of music infecting mind and body, a very real presence. Love, daver

Kash Poet June 28, 2013 at 1:53 AM Amazing poetry!You are so different from rest of the poets!!

Poet Tacito June 27, 2013 at 7:54 PM How they sway unto the unforeseen horizons. Fantastic!

Pace Ink-U-Script June 27, 2013 at 11:25 AM Hello Nette...its been awhile my dear friend..This is a spectacular piece written here. I felt as if I was there along side of you..witnessing you dance the night away..what incredible images displayed here..hugs :)

Russell Sivey June 27, 2013 at 11:13 AM I just love the dancing moves that you exhibit within this striking write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and fascinating poem this afternoon! You have masterfully crafted a glorious piece! What a terrific poem, Great Work!!