Redundancy

How redundant is it
to give out a word to the wise.
Is it not the fools
who most need the advice?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breidenthal Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 11:44 PM
Definitely a good question! Perhaps most fools think they are quite wise, and may perk their ears when they hear that they must be being addressed. ;) Always, Laura
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 5:14 AM
So true. But of course it takes wisdom to accept advise. Nice...
Hicks Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 1:39 AM
Thanks for your visit and insight, Scott. This was somewhat of a silly piece from my end - but it seems to have gotten people thinking :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 7:04 AM
smiling very well crafted excellent pen timothy
Hicks Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 1:38 AM
Thanks Liam!
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 9:23 PM
hahaha. GOOD thought!!!!
Hicks Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Happy you received the punchline, friend :)
Bordner Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 7:50 PM
There is a fool in every wise man...they are wise because they know they are part foolish, hence they understand their nature's more advantageously. I like how you confront tradition Timothy. Redundancy is one way to be thorough and diverse, i have an affinity for efficiency though. J.A.B.
Hicks Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Wise because they know they are part foolish - well stated! I think it was Bertrand Russell that stated, "The problems with the world today, is that fools and fanatics are always so sure of themselves. While the wise are full of doubts."
Helppi Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:35 PM
ho ho Tim, this may be so, but the fools never heed advice, only the wise. Safe travels to you, hope you enjoy the time with your sis and children.
Hicks Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:46 PM
I just got back yesterday - I had a great time spending time with my nephews and niece; playing board games and going on walks. But also very glad to be back in my own bed! I understand the original thoughts behind the saying - but it's funny to poke fun at things we say everyday, without putting much thought in it. Glad you liked!
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