Redreaming Dreams

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awakening dreams
     teasing yearning hopes
     of these longing hearts

     morning dashes warmth
     held in desires companion
     from their quiet nests

     in your great wonder
     snooze alarm, return poor souls
     to loves warm embrace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/15/2016 8:55:00 PM
Just finally seeing your remark to me. This tells me we are the only ones pretty smart. hahaha.
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:11:00 PM
It must be...
Date: 4/15/2016 7:00:00 PM
ha. I love your thinking in that last one. return us to loves warm embrace by the snooze alarm!!
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Date: 4/15/2016 9:11:00 PM
Andrea, you are the first to acknowledge the humor I intended for this piece. That either doesn't speak well of my comedic genus, or we are the only two with a some what twisted sense of humor. Not that it matters, one way or the other. Thanks, Charlie
Date: 4/13/2016 12:54:00 PM
Beautiful set of haiku beautifully written on dreaming. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 4/13/2016 2:07:00 PM
Thanks again BL...
Date: 4/10/2016 8:46:00 PM
Excellent 3 liners Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/10/2016 8:56:00 PM
Thanks Lenny...
Date: 4/7/2016 12:44:00 PM
Enjoyed them. Thanks.Regards.
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Date: 4/7/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thank you Rajat...
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