Charlie Smith Poet Haiku

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Redreaming Dreams

awakening dreams
     teasing yearning hopes
     of these longing hearts

     morning dashes warmth
     held in desires companion
     from their quiet nests

     in your great wonder
     snooze alarm, return poor souls
     to loves warm embrace

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Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2016 at 8:55 PM Just finally seeing your remark to me. This tells me we are the only ones pretty smart. hahaha. Charlie Smith May 15, 2016 at 10:11 PM It must be...

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2016 at 7:00 PM ha. I love your thinking in that last one. return us to loves warm embrace by the snooze alarm!! Charlie Smith April 15, 2016 at 9:11 PM Andrea, you are the first to acknowledge the humor I intended for this piece. That either doesn't speak well of my comedic genus, or we are the only two with a some what twisted sense of humor. Not that it matters, one way or the other. Thanks, Charlie

Bl Devnath April 13, 2016 at 12:54 PM Beautiful set of haiku beautifully written on dreaming. Loved always my lovely friend, bl Charlie Smith April 13, 2016 at 2:07 PM Thanks again BL...

Lenny Gazbowski April 10, 2016 at 8:46 PM Excellent 3 liners Charlie. Charlie Smith April 10, 2016 at 8:56 PM Thanks Lenny...

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty April 7, 2016 at 12:44 PM Enjoyed them. Thanks.Regards. Charlie Smith April 7, 2016 at 12:48 PM Thank you Rajat...