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Redemption

Twilight's blessing. Soft shades kiss the meadow lands adrift in blissful silence. Windows glow like welcome beacons hailing ships on storm-toss'd oceans sailing safe to harbor's rest, as villagers repose, so soon to sleep. At the edge of town the church is still. Strangled gravestones mark in mute remembrance struggles of an age gone by. Ivied walls and crumbling steeple, signs of venerable decay, where kinfolk meet to greet their Gods and beg forgiveness for their many indiscretions. A haven for the wealthy and the ne'er-do-well alike, it welcomes differences of race and creed. All worship embraced in its sheltered precincts, all sinners accepted according to need.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/27/2015 7:20:00 AM
I came across a prestigious list of the top 100 most published poets here and I am not surprise. Your quality indeed goes hand in hand with your quantity. I'll check one or two more of your works because this has given me a unique satisfaction. I give you a handshake of a definite 7!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/27/2015 7:39:00 AM
Thank you my friend! Your kind remarks are much appreciated. Keith
Date: 5/24/2015 11:16:00 PM
KEITH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/25/2015 10:51:00 AM
Many thanks!!!
Date: 5/22/2015 11:02:00 PM
Excellent write Keith, I like your awesome poem,well penned..........................Afolabi.
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Date: 5/23/2015 3:28:00 AM
Thank you my friend... much appreciated. Keith
Date: 5/21/2015 7:59:00 PM
i love the way you're able to create such a powerful mood in your writing. i can feel the "blissful silence" in the twilight. bravo, keith!
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Date: 5/22/2015 2:40:00 AM
Thanks Ilene! much appreciated. Keith
Date: 5/21/2015 6:09:00 PM
Keith, your write is beautiful with great words and phrases, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, lasagna
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/21/2015 7:07:00 PM
You're welcome BW !

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