Redemption

Twilight's blessing. 
Soft shades kiss the meadow lands 
adrift in blissful silence. 
Windows glow like welcome beacons 
hailing ships on storm-toss'd oceans 
sailing safe to harbor's rest, as villagers 
repose, so soon to sleep. 

At the edge of town the church is still. 
Strangled gravestones mark in mute remembrance 
struggles of an age gone by. 
Ivied walls and crumbling steeple, 
signs of venerable decay, where kinfolk meet 
to greet their Gods and beg forgiveness 
for their many indiscretions.

A haven for the wealthy and the ne'er-do-well alike, 
it welcomes differences of race and creed. 
All worship embraced in its sheltered precincts, 
all sinners accepted according to need.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 7:20 AM
I came across a prestigious list of the top 100 most published poets here and I am not surprise. Your quality indeed goes hand in hand with your quantity. I'll check one or two more of your works because this has given me a unique satisfaction. I give you a handshake of a definite 7!
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May 27, 2015 at 7:39 AM
Thank you my friend! Your kind remarks are much appreciated. Keith
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May 24, 2015 at 11:16 PM
KEITH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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May 25, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Many thanks!!!
Muideen Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 11:02 PM
Excellent write Keith, I like your awesome poem,well penned..........................Afolabi.
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May 23, 2015 at 3:28 AM
Thank you my friend... much appreciated. Keith
Bauer Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:59 PM
i love the way you're able to create such a powerful mood in your writing. i can feel the "blissful silence" in the twilight. bravo, keith!
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May 22, 2015 at 2:40 AM
Thanks Ilene! much appreciated. Keith
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May 21, 2015 at 6:09 PM
Keith, your write is beautiful with great words and phrases, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, lasagna
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May 21, 2015 at 7:07 PM
You're welcome BW !
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