Redemption

I have expanded
on the theory
of reincarnation
beyond
that
of comming back
as a human being, or
other animal,
                    or plant
   of     some     sort.

Maybe
some,
the exceptionally clear-sighted,
become a thought or philosophy,
enfused
in
those who need this chemical
jolt the most.

So, the bitter loner,
aging before his prime
               has
a
                      turn
             of perspective.

This
       becomes
a boisterous
                   truth
             singing off-
   tune
accapella.

                                     Always take care
                                     of those who love you,
                                     for devotion
                                     comes with a slim few.

                                     Always you should
                                     live up your time alone;
                                     But, the point is
                                     to love and to be loved

                                     always genuinely
                                     always generously.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 9, 2010 at 5:18 PM
So enjoyed reading your very creative write.. with luv..
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