Redemption

Shed, dark crimson red. Staining an old rugged tree. Precious cleansing blood.

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Date: 3/19/2010 9:55:00 AM

this is worth rereading for the easter season!! more of these uplifting poems is what I need. thanks my friend!!

Date: 3/17/2010 5:22:00 PM

redemption meditation . Something I need to do more often. Just your write does it Marty. God bless yo0u and yours.-Robert

Date: 3/15/2010 4:33:00 PM

sad...very sad...a different take on the crucifix Light & Love

Date: 3/11/2010 7:49:00 PM

Amen my brother.. a powerful Senryu and a message that will never fade away.. thankxxx for sharing this perfect poem..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Date: 3/11/2010 9:42:00 AM

good job

Date: 3/11/2010 5:39:00 AM

Fitting poem for the season. Good use of alliteration and imagery to convey your message. Keep on writing!! Karen

Date: 3/10/2010 9:16:00 PM

cleansing to take out the bad blood, and create hopefully the good and upcoming? interesting good haiku