Redemption

Shed, dark crimson red.
Staining an old rugged tree.
Precious cleansing blood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 9:55 AM
this is worth rereading for the easter season!! more of these uplifting poems is what I need. thanks my friend!!
Dufresne Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 5:22 PM
redemption meditation . Something I need to do more often. Just your write does it Marty. God bless yo0u and yours.-Robert
Guzzi Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 4:33 PM
sad...very sad...a different take on the crucifix Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Amen my brother.. a powerful Senryu and a message that will never fade away.. thankxxx for sharing this perfect poem..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Culverhouse Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 9:42 AM
good job
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March 11, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Fitting poem for the season. Good use of alliteration and imagery to convey your message. Keep on writing!! Karen
Arteaga Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 9:16 PM
cleansing to take out the bad blood, and create hopefully the good and upcoming? interesting good haiku
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