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Redemption

REASONS BEYOND MY CONTROL HAVE LEFT ME COLD AN EMPTY SHELL OF BEING MINDLESS DOING A VAPOR CARESSING THE END CARELESS WITHOUT SUBSTANCE RUNNING TO THE VOID KISSING THE COLD HANDS PLEADING FOR MERCY LABORED MOVEMENT PULLING ME UNDER THE WAVE PUSHING HARDER DON'T LET GO I'M COMING.

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Date: 5/25/2018 11:26:00 PM
"A man disliked by many And was loved by very few" was such an unexpected twist, it has a ring of complete honesty and truth in it. Nicely done, Carol.
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Date: 5/25/2018 11:13:00 PM
It is amazing how much time we can "waste" on grieving something lost, and yet, sometimes we need to. It's a joy to feel alright about the place you are in though. Keep writing.
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Date: 5/25/2018 11:10:00 PM
hahahahah very funny! But you are right, some people seem to always look at the downside.
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