Joanna Daniel Poet Pleiades

Redeemer - a Pleiades

Redeemer of mankind
    Relinquished His life on
        Revered Calvary's tree,
            Remitting this world's sins,
        Resurrected again;
    Risen Saviour, He now
Reigns supreme in heaven.


04.15.2021



For Kim Merryman's "Pleiades - R" contest

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Jan Allison April 19, 2021 at 5:06 PM excellent ink Jo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley April 19, 2021 at 3:05 PM Dear Jo, your gifted pen spills with reverent beauty in your prayerful poem. Splendid! Congratulations for your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Merryman April 19, 2021 at 2:50 PM This wowed me, Jo! Beautiful description of your title and the flow of your words and lines was excellent! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May April 19, 2021 at 9:53 AM Glad to see this topping the list Jo, Congrats on your win

Joseph May April 17, 2021 at 3:42 PM Redeemed by his blood, Very nicely done Jo, best wishes

Gordon Mcconnell April 17, 2021 at 9:34 AM Lovely piece Jo, bringing home the story of redemption. Blessings always,Gordon

Tom Cunningham April 17, 2021 at 9:14 AM Your faith shines through in your pleiades Jo, well written, Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit April 17, 2021 at 8:07 AM Your "R"'s shine in this poem of divinity and worship. Excellent work, Jo.

Heidi Sands April 17, 2021 at 7:01 AM This is excellent. Well done Jo :)

Demetrios Trifiatis April 16, 2021 at 8:50 AM Inspirational writing that illuminates the soul, dearest little sister, Jo! Wonderfully done! Hugs xxx

Juliet Ligon April 15, 2021 at 5:29 PM I hope this wins. The message and your layout are wonderful!

Connie Marcum Wong April 15, 2021 at 10:24 AM You used this form to the best of its ability in this marvelous poem Jo. Bravo! I am sure it will rate very high in the contest. Blessings xxoo

Regina Mcintosh April 15, 2021 at 8:15 AM I love love love this!!! Wonderful - I hope it wins top placement. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Jenna Logan April 15, 2021 at 8:10 AM You've chosen perfect 'R' words to describe his sacrifice. This Pleiades is wonderful, Jo.

Victor Buhagiar April 15, 2021 at 8:02 AM A great R Pleiades on such a spiritual level. Best for a win.

Alexis Y. April 15, 2021 at 7:54 AM WoW! Jo, You used the letter R to compose a well-written spiritual write. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis