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Sustain your strive; nobody will ignore them entirely. Your life will have a whole hot tune if you're brave. When things turn out badly, we might be in a fury. But, yielding is not for you even in your loud lake wave. We were astounded by the breeze, and you'll excel. We can't earn what we need; thus, we pace with the flow. We can't avoid it. As anticipated, the issue dwells. Would you check your arranged time in the row? The focus of life is to confer as much as possible. To start a fruitful day afresh, perform a spare tune. Waves may spread and also refract the postural. Awareness allows taking grasp of any halt boon. In awful situations, fade has no impact on mood. We have yet to enter a significant stage of life. Our bodies and spirits must always sync, not feud The diversification is both extensive and strife A superior portrayal of each feeling! Spirits cry. Utter beating your heart again, and sing the fresh melody. Reckon ambitiously, and your angels will fly into the sky. Don't allow a faulty mindset to render you poorly. Even if everything fizzles, hold your eyes open. You have stayed high since I am on your edge. Future may fade! Your actions sway your decision. Put forth an attempt to focus on your pledge. Searching for a flaw in our deeds is a misuse of sway. We might avoid it if we have the choice of finding an error. We did not cause any anguish to them in any way. Indeed, the peaceful water might cause major terror.
Written: July 6, 2021 A Brian Strand July 8 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 7/9/2021 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Love your line, "In awful situations, fade has no impact on mood." So True. Enjoy your win with blessings..............
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:02:00 AM
"Our bodies and spirits must always sync, not feud The diversification is both extensive and strife" It is curious that we sometimes do not realize this, fighting all of our soul's efforts.
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Date: 7/8/2021 11:58:00 PM
Beautiful Creations. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/7/2021 10:01:00 PM
Our bodies and spirits must always sync, not feud.....What a lovely line...Delice
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Date: 7/8/2021 6:28:00 AM
Thank you very much, Arleen. I'm so glad you like it, have a great day and blessings.
Date: 7/7/2021 11:18:00 AM
Lighthouses your verses, my dear friend, Lasaad, helping one navigate through the dark night of ignorance, avoiding thus the perilous rocks of misfortune till he reaches the serene shores of peace and contentment. God bless you!
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Date: 7/7/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend, Demetrios; your immaculate comment shed more allure on this poem. I appreciate your special visit and gracious words. Blessings and my finest regards
Date: 7/7/2021 5:55:00 AM
Great advice, Lassad. Your message resonates in your words.
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Date: 7/7/2021 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay, for your comment and kind words, blessings and kindest regards
Date: 7/7/2021 4:20:00 AM
The dualities we have of birth.. those we acquire on earth.. and all that we can gain after our sins and losses make of us a humanity of abilities to redeem their souls.. What remains is of weight and value and that what will help us in our combat to regain our souls who are worth of the name Human.. You have conveyed a lot about human nature within the layers of Life in a so crafted and wonderful poetry, Lassad.. a great pleasure to read your beauties! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 7/7/2021 7:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Besma, your comment added more allure and enchantment, indeed souls make us humans, that is obvious, but unfortunately nowadays humanity seems to have lost part of it, which is why we see all the turmoil around the world, we pray for better days all the time.
Date: 7/6/2021 11:03:00 PM
Our life has its pitfall. But we must get up and move ahead in spiritual grace. A great poem.
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Date: 7/7/2021 7:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor for your support and wonderful comment, my kindest regards and blessings
Date: 7/6/2021 7:27:00 PM
We should never allow our feelings to navigate us in dark waters, thank you for sharing your delightful pen :)
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Date: 7/7/2021 7:05:00 AM
True, Rose, navigation in such dark areas darkens our spiritual nature, kindest regards and blessings

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