Redbirds and Whitebirds

Soul mates that would give
Power to the one they join
Love beneath the scorn 

One will truly live
Heads on both sides of the coin 
Changelessness reborn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 2:56 PM
Beautiful Haiku, James
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March 19, 2009 at 6:55 AM
Dear Yoni, Master of the Haiku Each entwined with the other Written with a flavor the Haiku is meant to convey Astounding Write ALWATS ...HG
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February 28, 2009 at 5:53 PM
Much to think about in this one. Creative use of just six lines. Nice one! Karen
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February 28, 2009 at 11:22 AM
The soul mates' "Heads on both sides of the coin" is very intuitive. Excellent use of a double Haiku style, Yoni. Inventive and creative. Love, Carolyn
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February 28, 2009 at 6:50 AM
well written, in this form!! nicely done! ~ Arany
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February 27, 2009 at 8:58 PM
Beautiful haiku's,...Creatively crafted.. True message indeed..God Bless *Tyesha
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 8:42 PM
Yoni very well done haiku's - Loved the message - god Bless, MJ
Bulger Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 8:27 PM
WOW! :)
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