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Redbirds and Whitebirds

Soul mates that would give Power to the one they join Love beneath the scorn One will truly live Heads on both sides of the coin Changelessness reborn

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James Fraser

Date: 5/25/2009 2:56:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, James

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/19/2009 6:55:00 AM

Dear Yoni, Master of the Haiku Each entwined with the other Written with a flavor the Haiku is meant to convey Astounding Write ALWATS ...HG

Date: 2/28/2009 5:53:00 PM

Much to think about in this one. Creative use of just six lines. Nice one! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2009 11:22:00 AM

The soul mates' "Heads on both sides of the coin" is very intuitive. Excellent use of a double Haiku style, Yoni. Inventive and creative. Love, Carolyn

Arany P.

Date: 2/28/2009 6:50:00 AM

well written, in this form!! nicely done! ~ Arany

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/27/2009 8:58:00 PM

Beautiful haiku's,...Creatively crafted.. True message indeed..God Bless *Tyesha

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/27/2009 8:42:00 PM

Yoni very well done haiku's - Loved the message - god Bless, MJ

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 2/27/2009 8:27:00 PM

WOW! :)