Red Wheelbarrow

The red wheelbarrow
with its cement smudges
and rusty scratches
dwarfs the white rabbit
nibbling young lettuce
covered in morning dew
next to the flowering
crepe myrtle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Rainey Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:50 PM
I like your humor. I will be looking forward to your poem about fog, perhaps with a parakeet instead of a cat? Jim R.
Rainey Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 5:29 AM
What happened to the rain water and the white chicken?
Stroh Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 1:32 PM
the rainwater is resting in the tank and the white chicken is scratching around in the strawberry patch.
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