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Red Velvet Dream

Red velvet joy, delicious thrill of the palate; sweet cream cheesy coverlet; scarlet colored bunk cotton blanketing; lustful bliss art!

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/23/2019 11:03:00 PM

M. L., Sumptuous Epulaeryu. It was always red velvet for my birthday cake. -Richard

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/24/2019 4:28:00 PM

They you enjoy your birthdays! Thanks Richard.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/23/2019 6:59:00 AM

I am so ready to taste this right now! And I have not had breakfast yet.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/24/2019 4:28:00 PM

Ah but, perhaps for later? Thanks

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/19/2019 1:10:00 PM

On, now you made me hungry.!! Perfectly penned. Panagiota

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/22/2019 1:52:00 PM

Haha, Epulaeryu's seem to do that. Thanks Panagiota.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/18/2019 11:22:00 AM

That's a cake you described in a poetic awesome delicious way? You made it sound so inviting and delightful with your poetic ord choice. Kudos. Pls pleez do comment on my newest poem too. I luv to hear from yah.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/22/2019 1:53:00 PM

Will do, and thanks for dropping by.