Timothy Mcguire Poet Rhyme

Red Umbrella

Red umbrella, pink raincoat and galoshes
Hopping from puddle to puddle, giggling after the splashes
Puppy dog, dolly, and wagon in tow
Raindrops, sunshine and a beautiful rainbow
Mommy and Daddy happy as they can be
Enjoying the rain with their little lady

The red umbrella poetry contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
10/31/18

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P.S. Awtry November 20, 2018 at 9:46 AM I just read this and thought it was delightful and different and I see from the comments below that congratulations are in order! Loved it and congrats! Timothy Mcguire November 20, 2018 at 4:23 PM Thank you very much P.S.!

Jan Allison November 17, 2018 at 1:01 PM what a cute poem Timothy:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Timothy Mcguire November 17, 2018 at 4:04 PM Thank you Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2018 at 11:30 AM - A sweet and lovely winning poem Timothy :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Timothy Mcguire November 14, 2018 at 8:19 PM Thank you Sunshine

Curtis Moorman November 14, 2018 at 12:20 AM Tim, I can picture you as the Grandfather of this child as you watched her, along with her parents, frolicking in the puddles left by the rain. As the Grandfather of 9, I revel in seeing them unobtrusively and without forethought do what they do and thanking God for allowing me to live to see it. Beautiful poem from the type of man I just described. Timothy Mcguire November 14, 2018 at 6:04 AM Thank you Curtis for your kind words. God bless you and yours.

Eve Roper November 13, 2018 at 11:06 PM Thank you for entering my contest, Timothy, you had everything I was looking for. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve Timothy Mcguire November 14, 2018 at 6:04 AM Thank you Eve.

Jennifer Proxenos November 10, 2018 at 1:10 AM That is such a cute poem Timothy. You have captured a very loving family walking the rain with their precious little handful. Well done, really enjoyed. Best regards, Jennifer Timothy Mcguire November 10, 2018 at 1:20 AM Thank you Jennifer!

Line Gauthier November 1, 2018 at 12:16 AM So sweet, Timothy. Timothy Mcguire November 6, 2018 at 1:51 AM Thank you very much.