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Red Umbrella

Red umbrella, pink raincoat and galoshes Hopping from puddle to puddle, giggling after the splashes Puppy dog, dolly, and wagon in tow Raindrops, sunshine and a beautiful rainbow Mommy and Daddy happy as they can be Enjoying the rain with their little lady The red umbrella poetry contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper 10/31/18

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/20/2018 9:46:00 AM

I just read this and thought it was delightful and different and I see from the comments below that congratulations are in order! Loved it and congrats!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/20/2018 4:23:00 PM

Thank you very much P.S.!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2018 1:01:00 PM

what a cute poem Timothy:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/17/2018 4:04:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2018 11:30:00 AM

- A sweet and lovely winning poem Timothy :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/14/2018 8:19:00 PM

Thank you Sunshine

Curtis Moorman

Date: 11/14/2018 12:20:00 AM

Tim, I can picture you as the Grandfather of this child as you watched her, along with her parents, frolicking in the puddles left by the rain. As the Grandfather of 9, I revel in seeing them unobtrusively and without forethought do what they do and thanking God for allowing me to live to see it. Beautiful poem from the type of man I just described.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/14/2018 6:04:00 AM

Thank you Curtis for your kind words. God bless you and yours.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/13/2018 11:06:00 PM

Thank you for entering my contest, Timothy, you had everything I was looking for. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/14/2018 6:04:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/10/2018 1:10:00 AM

That is such a cute poem Timothy. You have captured a very loving family walking the rain with their precious little handful. Well done, really enjoyed. Best regards, Jennifer

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/10/2018 1:20:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer!

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/1/2018 12:16:00 AM

So sweet, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/6/2018 1:51:00 AM

Thank you very much.