Red Train 3 the Christmas Muse

Outside my window the glimpse of a twinkling muse sprinkling little bits of imagination into my soul.
I espy a little Reindeer prancing in the deep, deep woods. Slanting my eyes just so I try to take a better look. Before I get to sing the first refrain of Jingle Bells, he has gone away. Hidden behind a white spruce filled with gold and silver pixie dust. The train keeps moving on, secured by fast moving rails that seem to have a destination of their own. Planting a cold kiss on the glass my voice turns to a whisper, and I feel miles away from my home. The sun is beginning to rise in the North and the dawning sun is infusing me with warmth. I can feel it dance on my cheek, rousing me slowly from a dreamless long night's sleep. No sun kinks on the rails, just the invisible passengers, the Conductor, and a Pullman porter who is fast asleep in his folding seat. My spirit roams free on this blessed morning. The wagon has an almost feel of religiosity attached to it. I sense the Conductor long before his shiny black shoes kiss the ground. " Missy, would you like a cup of warm milk?" But all I see in his toasted big brown hands is a bowl of hot steaming soup with a couple of dumplings. We exchange a puzzled look then I take it in my hands and bring it to my hungry mouth. I sip it slowly. As the liquid pours down my parched throat, an inkling of memory returns to me. I smile for the first time, in my fifteen long years. To be continued... Copyright © Mystic Rose Rose | Year Posted 2023
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Date: 11/10/2023 9:08:00 AM
You are such a brilliant storyteller, truly i love the detailed descriptions and how you’ve painted imagery and the flow of this as well as the rhythm of your lines. And the ending made me smile really too. And want to read whats next in this creative narrative… i loved it! I wish to write a story like this one day! You are so gifted, pleasure reading this
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Date: 11/10/2023 4:21:00 PM
I can't see why not, you should write a story too, they are fun to do, a different pace from poetry, will look forward to reading it if you write one. Love , xo
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