Red Tears

surrender on the condition
in me
the expectation of a million stem injury
in me

Karanganyar-Solo, 7 Februari 2006
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October 11, 2024 at 11:43 PM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 18, 2016 at 11:36 AM
nice to see this one again
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December 5, 2015 at 9:55 PM
:) SKAT
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April 17, 2013 at 10:47 PM
Welcome to the poetry soup, Ekohm . My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to my latest contest... called the “7 wonders” I ENJOY GIVING new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Thanks for your time *LINDA
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April 17, 2013 at 12:14 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup
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April 16, 2013 at 5:56 PM
Welcome eko :D what a nice write for a nice start :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D
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April 16, 2013 at 4:24 PM
Hello Ekohm, first of all I want to tell you how fun looking your avatar is#1. Next I want to wish you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. I wish for you the best in your writings while finding this community, one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up here by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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April 16, 2013 at 1:08 PM
Ekohm, well written. - Welcome to P-Soup, have fun with writing, reading and comments here with us. - Wish you all the best. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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