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Red Sweat

Your silence, a stillness of alluring patience seductive in it's resilience, suspicious magnificence, unmatched beauty demanding vigilance making this man rowdy and restless for your finesse, distressed by this drama of love's test, You're the only woman scratching this chest with passion's raging arrest, nails of sharp zest, the supreme Queen keeping me raw and hard, my only quest, I'm confessing you are the best, the most luxuriant caress, my unhesitant request, I want every feeling you're capable of conceiving Babe, knowing and revering your eclectic emotions, your unspoken demands, burning for your paradon and kiss, you will always know I am love in your hands share with me the fuel of fervent fire, gems be our eyes, together, golden pulse we've made - J.A.B.

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2015 12:48:00 AM

I'm filling up on my favorite writes, Justin. :) I see I've commented below...so what more can I add? This is just riveting beauty...You are so talented, my dear...

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/5/2015 1:22:00 AM

A riveting pulse you place up and down my soul Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/13/2014 11:06:00 PM

Rowdy and restless for your finesse...what a magical line. Justin...you are so good with these writes. I could read them over and over. I see it is one of your most highly viewed writes. I know why. Your passion is magnetic. Stopping by for a visit.

Justin Bordner
Date: 11/14/2014 2:46:00 AM

My desire is at her command Jade. My passion is meant to be felt repeatedly...I like magnetizing you. Your face is lovely...J.A.B.

Date: 10/20/2014 11:09:00 PM

this is just the most inspirational poem i have ever hear it create that intense feeling that inspired me to live.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/22/2014 2:45:00 AM

To love is to live...J.A.B.

Po Et

Date: 10/15/2014 9:44:00 PM

Where did the inspiration for this magical work come from??? You florescent essence is almost as if you're a lyrical genius! This conceptual muse invigorates my new outlook on life that is pivotal on culling off mormons. This orgasmic writing is testament to the primordial orifices that you have adapted...Po.Et

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/17/2014 8:18:00 PM

My Love Muse inspired this poem PoEt. Genius is all about Awareness, seeing, feeling, hearing the world for what One needs it to be, not waiting for truth when you can make the truth, the truth of your soul. I also believe that Divine Inspiration is an integral part of Genius. Genius and Mastering a craft, or yourself, are one and the same, to revolutionize! Thank you PoEt...J.A.B.

Po Et

Date: 10/14/2014 6:00:00 PM

siq, how exotic, much rhyme, very seductive, many poem. Nice

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/15/2014 8:58:00 PM

Women communicate in so many mysterious and heated ways, challenging to be realized without misinterpretation. To dicover their precious meanings PoEt...J.A.B.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/7/2014 2:45:00 PM

Opening seduction scene...silence! but her body talks instead...provoking and imploring to be loved. She is an inspiration that keeps your fire burning...and you know it! // paul

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/8/2014 8:28:00 PM

Indeed I do know her instrument of desirse Paul, she is inspiration Total my friend. J.A.B.

Jay Loveless

Date: 10/6/2014 11:57:00 PM

The last two lines are my favorite. As always, an amazing write my friend.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/8/2014 8:23:00 PM

Exploration passion and pain with someone you love Jay, this can produce a red sweat, glorious and hot...J.A.B.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 10/5/2014 12:07:00 AM

Hello again! I'll be reading more of your poems. Have a nice day! -DWB

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 2:14:00 AM

Please do David, your poetry and perceptions are very inspirational. I'm looking forward to reading more of your spiritual work. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/5/2014 12:04:00 AM

This is a mighty great romantic piece you wrote here, Justin! I felt the "fuel of fervent fire" in every line and this love of yours is as strong as the finest titanium. I'm going to rate this a well-deserved 7. Have a grand weekend!

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 2:11:00 AM

Thank you David! Dynamic romance, her subtlties, my necessities, our fantasies, coming together to make very strong admiration. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/5/2014 12:05:00 AM

This comment is made by her brother, David William Breidenthal! I apologize for this mistake!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/4/2014 11:42:00 PM

Poem of Day Justin - Congratulations... You are super-awesome and this is such a superlative write. Sending you a smile, Verlena...

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 2:07:00 AM

We make eachother somthin supernatural Verlena...J.A.B.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/4/2014 11:41:00 PM

Congratulations on Poem of the day. Love and prayers, Gina

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 1:48:00 AM

Lets congratulate Passion...thanks Regina. J.A.B.

Vera Prince

Date: 10/4/2014 7:54:00 PM

Very passionate, moving

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 1:54:00 AM

My passion for her moves with many speeds, with studious heart Vera, thanks. J.A.B.

Charlene Wilcox

Date: 10/4/2014 6:43:00 PM

This is so appealing to read.TY for sharing this with Me and Congratulations on Your Win!

Charlene Wilcox
Date: 10/9/2014 9:08:00 PM

You are very welcome Sir...

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2014 8:23:00 PM

To create and share the meaning of passion from my heart is a blessing, Charlene, thank you for augmenting the value thereof...J.A.B.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/4/2014 1:31:00 PM

Congratulations on this amazing poem of soulful passion. The words fall like the notes of a jazz musician jamming with the strings of his heart as is only instrument. Congratulations on being poem of the day.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 1:59:00 AM

My wonder for her inspires improvisation of soul, an instrumental observation of her uncommon complexity. We make flexible jazz together Maurice. J.A.B.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/4/2014 1:15:00 PM

What a beautiful, passionate poem, Justin. Congratulations on "Poem of the Day." Sandra

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 1:50:00 AM

A poem of natural beauty Sandra, physical, emotional, reciprocal...J.A.B.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/4/2014 11:13:00 AM

Congratulations on poem of the day. God bless you with many prayers for all the best poetry.... love & prayers, Gina

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 1:43:00 AM

Thank you Gina, we achieve nothing of great strength, hope and beauty without Divine Guidance, and I have been blessed to have this woman in my life. Thank you for your love and prayers Gina...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/4/2014 9:56:00 AM

I'm so glad to see your masterpiece here, Justin. You deserve to be POTD...and POTW...and POTY! Just coming back to congratulate you....

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 1:37:00 AM

She is the Masterpiece Eileen, the finest poetry in my eyes! I'm so very proud to have you, an Angel of romance and master of passion celebrate my work. Thank you Eileen...J.A.B.

Jerry Bolton

Date: 10/4/2014 9:17:00 AM

WoW! She is not likely to misunderstand the message you are sending here, J.B. Excellent penned appeal to the lady of your heart.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 1:31:00 AM

The message, a man enamored with the labyrinth of his Lady's love, disinterested in changing her, revering her extremes, prostrate at her prowess for passion Jerry. She is a heart puzzle. J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2014 8:05:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Justin ! - Congrats on "Poem of the day" !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/6/2014 1:24:00 AM

This poem is beautiful because it shows a man knowing what he needs, loyal to love. Thanks Anne...J.A.B.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/4/2014 1:12:00 AM

For each of us, there is only one person who can make a heart race uncontrollably. You've written with amazing depth about yours.... This is another beautifully expressed and soulful poem from you, Justin!

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/4/2014 2:59:00 AM

She is my Muse of love wonder, a creature wild and wise, a feline of fantastic pursuit. Your sentiments strike me with passion Kelly...J.A.B.

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/3/2014 4:18:00 PM

Thrilling from the title to the signature. Lovely and passionate. Great write!! Love, Juli-Michelle

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/3/2014 8:22:00 PM

Red Sweat is very provocative indeed Juli, a symptom of anxious passion, a moisture of savage perspiration beading upon alert flesh. Thanks for the love Juli...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/2/2014 3:48:00 PM

I noticed the reassurance of "You're the only woman" a lot in your poetry as of late. This reassurance is so dear and so considerate of you to make. She is lucky to have your love in her hands...may she always care for it and grow with it. . Favorited, because I can feel the fire...Always, Laura

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/2/2014 8:48:00 PM

And thank you for the opportunity. Wouldn't have been possible without you. It has been lovely connecting with you and your superb poetry. I am so grateful. <3 ~Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/2/2014 8:43:00 PM

Your sincere sensitivity feels good on the skin of my hopes Laura. Sometimes fire is good for you...Congratulations on creating a 1st Place Masterpiece that will inspire many souls, worthy of century's of celebration great Poetess...Justin

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/2/2014 3:44:00 PM

I admire the "golden pulse" of your rhyming on this truly captivating poem. . . exceedingly passionate. I am interested by the silence, how something so subtle yet so large in depth can seduce the very heart and soul. The "suspicious magnificence" too drags the reader into the suspense of this love... this is truly golden Justin. As always too, there is your signature alluring alliteration and always an intriguing title to carry these delicacies of words. Exceptional... ~

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/2/2014 8:30:00 PM

I love how you look into the corners of my concepts, my heart in unrest Laura. You're so good at inspecting and embracing the framework of passion. Yes dear Laura, you feel the disquieting romance in the silence, its beautiful! "Alluring Alliteration" lovin that touch Laura! Titles to Art, or works of scholarship are vital in spirit, essential design meriting much respect. J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/2/2014 3:35:00 PM

Silence can be seductive in its own way indeed,and security can make the heart grows fonder.A beautiful poem.Sensual and with class- Charma

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/2/2014 8:21:00 PM

Sometimes a strong woman just needs to hear what it is that makes her sexy, and mysterious, to hear affirmation that she is the hottest snd brightest star in her man's heaven Charma. Silence can be the statement of a simmering passion. I like your vision very much Charma...J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2014 12:19:00 PM

- A beautiful poem, Justin - Nothing is more gorgeous than meeting the only right woman in your life - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/2/2014 12:47:00 PM

So very true Anne, a woman that tests thresholds, a woman of undefinable virtue. J.A.B.