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Red Sun Rising

Mr. Sun awaken by Dawn was all fired-red with a big yawn Miss Moon waning away from her pink fullness wants to stay they fought stretched, and yawned until Mr. Sun won Thus, Easter morn has finally begun if you happen to be wondering What the moral of this poem is nature follows patterns from the beginning of time until Jesus (God) sets change into action
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Kerr Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 11:52 AM
I’m flattered by your review of Not Quite So. Many thanks for that. As for this magnificent piece it represents poetry as it should be. Colourful, creative and image rich Howard
Kerr Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 11:48 AM
I’m flattered by your review of Not Quite So. Many thanks for that. As for this magnificent piece it represents poetry as it should be. Colourful, creative and image rich Howard
Proxenos Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 1:45 AM
I hope you had a wonderful Easter dear friend Sara, your poem is beautiful and so perfect and apt for Easter day - very creative with awesome imagery. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 3:42 PM
The wonderful thing about God's creation earth. How things follow their natural order
Empress Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 9:39 AM
How beautiful is the picture and also your poem, as youv written on that fits the mood of easter so well here! I hope you had a lovely one with your family! Sending you light always dear sara
Onclaud Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 4:19 AM
an elevated work echoing the glory of rebirth...beautiful, sara
Rolland Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 2:37 AM
don't know about jesus, but the imagery is great and enlightening , wonderful poetry, enjoyed
Buhagiar Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 2:19 AM
A great moral. He is risen, yet we prefer the dark moon.
Magdalinos Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 9:18 PM
Dear Sara, a beautiful poem. Blessings
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 10:41 AM
- Lovely poem, Sara :) - hugs
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