Red Sun

Red sun rising in the east
A ball of fire in the distance
Gleaming into orange-yellow sphere
Rising higher in the sky
Flashing into yellow heat through the day
Till soft moon forms and gorgeous sun hides her face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 4:44 AM
- Beautiful poem, Karen !! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Clemons Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 7:45 PM
Deep imagination, Karen. Enjoyed poem overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
Anglesey Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 2:14 PM
I like the transforming sun...very nice imagery and verse...
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