Red Sun

A blush colors the sky's cheeks;
Oh my! that flirtatious Sun!
Steamy whispers in the ear
a smile left behind.



Red Sun Contest
7/1/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Great poetic quality..Congrats on your win..Sara
A  Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:24 PM
Melani.... congrats *****SKAT
Anglesey Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 5:44 PM
You have characterized the sun as a flirt... very well done. Congratulations on your win :)
Jones Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 4:44 PM
Very cute..congratulations
Johnson Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 3:38 PM
Wow, such a love affair with nature. Congrats on your win Melani.
Posey Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 9:08 AM
cleverly written and easy to read... Congratulations on your win.... Jake
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