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Red Sun

Gory clouds, glossy effect Like an ended Spartan war Fueled by a magical orb In a robe of blood. 29/06/2013 Contest: Red Sun

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Date: 6/29/2013 4:11:00 PM
yours is very different from the others. I like the comparison to spartans. they had some truly gory wars!! Good luck in the contest, Goodness.
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