Red Sun

Gory clouds, glossy effect
Like an ended Spartan war
Fueled by a magical orb
In a robe of blood.

29/06/2013
Contest: Red Sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 29, 2013 at 4:11 PM
yours is very different from the others. I like the comparison to spartans. they had some truly gory wars!! Good luck in the contest, Goodness.
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