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Samberine Everose

Red Sun

Glows softly behind those clouds,
Light rays touch everyone's heart,
A new fresh morning it brings,
Created by God..



June 27,2013
Russell Sivey Red Sun
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July 25, 2013 at 2:31 PM

Jelina.... congrats *****SKAT

July 23, 2013 at 9:40 PM

Very nice one..congratulations

July 23, 2013 at 6:03 PM

Very well done. Warm images with peaceful feel. Congratulations on your win :)

June 27, 2013 at 6:15 AM

This was really nice. Though, I think "Rays touch" or "Ray touches" sounds more fitting. Either way, I like what you did here. Nice work!

Samberine Everose

June 28, 2013 at 6:17 AM

Thank you for taking time to read and leaved some comments on my piece, I'll look into the suggestions you made...Jelina

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