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Red Sun

Hell fire rising in the east.
Captivating evil beast.
Bathing me in all it's warmth.
Now my souls on fire.

for Russel Sivvey's contest Red Sun
June 26th

Copyright © Robert Johnson | Year Posted 2013

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July 25, 2013 at 2:31 PM

Robert, .... congrats *****SKAT

July 23, 2013 at 9:38 PM

Wow...like this one too...congratulations

July 23, 2013 at 6:01 PM

Great lines and imagery. "Captivating evil beast" very original. Congratulations on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 1, 2013 at 8:53 AM

just stopping to say hi and thanks for your comments. Joe's Bday is today and I have to run and get something!!

Andrea Dietrich

June 28, 2013 at 1:28 AM

oh now THIS is great stuff. I sure hope you put it right into that contest. Love it.

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