Red Sun

A sphere of fire signals dawn
Red sun rising, all is calm
Birds songs greet the crimson ball
Picture perfect morn

Contest name:  Red  Sun
6-26-13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 25, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Hi, Jospeh.... congrats *****SKAT
Jones Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 8:00 PM
I love the signaling dawn....congratulations Joseph....great win
Anglesey Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 6:12 PM
Picture perfect poem. Congratulations on your win :)
Anglesey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:32 PM
A sphere of fire signals dawn- spectacular first line for this stunning radiant poem... :)
Jones Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 7:58 PM
I like it too Joseph..I think it will be a top winner..
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 1:10 AM
a sweet and pretty one for the contest, Joseph.
Horsman Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 12:14 AM
amazing scene you paint here, love this,,,
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June 27, 2013 at 6:43 PM
It's a great descriptive poem that catches the attention of the reader. Fabulous image painted. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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