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Red Sun

Slipping from the edge of earth reluctant to say farewell, the red sun keeps me spellbound, pledging to return
_____________ For Russell's Contest: Red Sun Dodoitsu 6/23/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/3/2013 7:26:00 PM
Belated big congratulations my dear friend Carrie for the super win and the other recent wins! Thanks for sharing this precious gem you've shared this morning. I love it and so enjoyed! Happy wkend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/25/2013 4:30:00 PM
Congrats on your descriptive winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2013 2:23:00 PM
what I mean to say... was WOW! I love the imagery Carrie, you sure know how to awake them words... love it...SKAT
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Date: 7/25/2013 2:22:00 PM
Carrie, I'm going over a few of the contest again. thank you for taking us to the edge of the earth... i felt the fall myself... .... congrats *****SKAT
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Date: 7/23/2013 5:38:00 PM
Great imagery in these spectacular lines...congratulations on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 7/23/2013 3:24:00 PM
Carrie congratulation on your fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/23/2013 8:54:00 AM
Carrie, this is perfectly done... COngrats on your win... Hugs... Jake
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Date: 6/25/2013 12:18:00 PM
Love the imagery here Carrie!Beautiful Tanka.
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Date: 6/25/2013 9:55:00 AM
Hi Carrie. Love this little piece! Been too busy here but hope to have more time soon. Stay sweet....Caleb
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Date: 6/24/2013 2:45:00 AM
Lovely write Carrie. Well done. AO
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Date: 6/23/2013 5:28:00 PM
another wonderful gem ....best wishes
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Date: 6/23/2013 3:14:00 PM
nice one, carrie! i like it...
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