Red Sun

transient in its glazed luster coasting through windsong petals russet sun bathes morning eyes to spark my hummed wish! Contest: Russell Sivey's Red Sun 23 june 2013
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Gasun Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 7:22 PM
Hi, my dearest friend Nette! This is another excellent poem with excellent image! My belated warmest hearty congratulations here and the many other super wins recently! Hugs & cheers! love lots, Leonora
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
A  Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:24 PM
Nette.... congrats *****SKAT
Anglesey Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Beautifully amazing... congratulations on your well deserved win.:)
Jones Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 4:33 PM
Very beautiful nette, congratulations
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 3:23 PM
Nette congratulations on your well deserve win. An outstanding Doditsu. Warm Smiles, Connie
Devnath  Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 12:25 PM
A heartiest congrats on your glorious win. I smelt before with my sense that you will win. Love much and enjoyed your winning smile. Loved always, bl
Posey Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 8:49 AM
Beautifully written and smooth in flow... Great work. Congratulations on a well written winner... Jake
Anglesey Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 9:59 AM
nette, a tranquil scene painted with such elegant lines. Good luck. This super amazing :)
Duncan Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:46 PM
nice write,,, good luck in contest ;}
Devnath  Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 10:52 AM
Excellently done as always. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Chircop Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 4:20 PM
I love the russet sun..beautiful scenery..almost a paintimg
Squyres Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 11:32 AM
Wonderful !! You have captured the scene and the emotions. <3
Neels Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 6:19 AM
Heya Netta, absolutely love this, especially the ending. Wishing you all the best for Russell's contest :) hugs Wilma
Posey Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 6:41 PM
With each read in this list of contest entries I just keep gettin' knocked further down the list....great work Nette... Jake
Poet Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 12:37 PM
Wow!!Wonderful!Write the date below the poem Nette.
Ober Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 11:45 AM
This is beautiful, Nette!! You have packed so much imagery into four short lines. Very well done :)
Nair Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 7:50 AM
This has a captivating lustre about it, nette, love it!! Jag
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 7:49 AM
So well depicted! Hugs Rick
Oyewole Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 2:49 AM
A brilliant write my dear. Good luck in the contest. AO
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 5:47 PM
Reads like winning material for the contest..Good luck..The russet sun must be a beautiful color..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for your visit to my work where I refered to Morton Salt who has the slogan of "When It Rains It Pours"..Sara
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