Red Sun

transient in its glazed luster coasting through windsong petals russet sun bathes morning eyes to spark my hummed wish! Contest: Russell Sivey's Red Sun 23 june 2013

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Len Gasun

Date: 8/3/2013 7:22:00 PM

Hi, my dearest friend Nette! This is another excellent poem with excellent image! My belated warmest hearty congratulations here and the many other super wins recently! Hugs & cheers! love lots, Leonora

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2013 4:29:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2013 2:24:00 PM

Nette.... congrats *****SKAT

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/23/2013 5:37:00 PM

Beautifully amazing... congratulations on your well deserved win.:)

Donna Jones

Date: 7/23/2013 4:33:00 PM

Very beautiful nette, congratulations

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/23/2013 3:23:00 PM

Nette congratulations on your well deserve win. An outstanding Doditsu. Warm Smiles, Connie

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/23/2013 12:25:00 PM

A heartiest congrats on your glorious win. I smelt before with my sense that you will win. Love much and enjoyed your winning smile. Loved always, bl

John Posey

Date: 7/23/2013 8:49:00 AM

Beautifully written and smooth in flow... Great work. Congratulations on a well written winner... Jake

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/4/2013 9:59:00 AM

nette, a tranquil scene painted with such elegant lines. Good luck. This super amazing :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/29/2013 3:46:00 PM

nice write,,, good luck in contest ;}

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/28/2013 10:52:00 AM

Excellently done as always. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/25/2013 4:20:00 PM

I love the russet sun..beautiful scenery..almost a paintimg

Debra Squyres

Date: 6/25/2013 11:32:00 AM

Wonderful !! You have captured the scene and the emotions. <3

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/25/2013 6:19:00 AM

Heya Netta, absolutely love this, especially the ending. Wishing you all the best for Russell's contest :) hugs Wilma

John Posey

Date: 6/24/2013 6:41:00 PM

With each read in this list of contest entries I just keep gettin' knocked further down the list....great work Nette... Jake

Kash Poet

Date: 6/24/2013 12:37:00 PM

Wow!!Wonderful!Write the date below the poem Nette.

Heather Ober

Date: 6/24/2013 11:45:00 AM

This is beautiful, Nette!! You have packed so much imagery into four short lines. Very well done :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/24/2013 7:50:00 AM

This has a captivating lustre about it, nette, love it!! Jag

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/24/2013 7:49:00 AM

So well depicted! Hugs Rick

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/24/2013 2:49:00 AM

A brilliant write my dear. Good luck in the contest. AO

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/23/2013 5:47:00 PM

Reads like winning material for the contest..Good luck..The russet sun must be a beautiful color..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for your visit to my work where I refered to Morton Salt who has the slogan of "When It Rains It Pours"..Sara