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Red Summer

silent yacht sunset rays bathe between bodies

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2016 10:09:00 AM

lovely imagery Teddy congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/28/2016 4:44:00 PM

Thank you so much for your applause, Jan!!! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2016 9:19:00 PM

Teddy did you mean to say "bathe"? the sunset rays bathe between bodies? If you had said it that way, I would have placed this higher. I love this.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/28/2016 4:47:00 AM

Lol. Typical typo of me.... Well, thanks Andrea, for enjoying my piece in your contest!! *^_^*

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/21/2016 11:05:00 PM

Sensuous !

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/22/2016 4:52:00 AM

Thanks Lenny!! ;-)