Red Summer

silent yacht
sunset rays bathe
between bodies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:09 AM
lovely imagery Teddy congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 4:44 PM
Thank you so much for your applause, Jan!!! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Teddy did you mean to say "bathe"? the sunset rays bathe between bodies? If you had said it that way, I would have placed this higher. I love this.
Kimathi Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Lol. Typical typo of me.... Well, thanks Andrea, for enjoying my piece in your contest!! *^_^*
Gazbowski Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Sensuous !
Kimathi Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 4:52 AM
Thanks Lenny!! ;-)
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