Red Stone

Natural hue of earth,
Embedded white crystals shine;
Jagged crimson edge.

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Elizabeth Neal

Date: 6/27/2009 10:19:00 AM

Nice, it paints a wonderful picture in my head. Good. Love Elizabeth

Date: 6/26/2009 4:10:00 PM

Interesting images paint a picture with words in this poem. I like the use of color. Nice one! Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2009 9:41:00 AM

Like your Haiku. Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/26/2009 3:17:00 AM

gorgeous! jim

Abe Lopez

Date: 6/25/2009 8:28:00 AM

great job gangsta. you r the man!!!!!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/24/2009 5:45:00 PM

Another winning haiku!! This is definitely your area of perfection!

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/24/2009 4:16:00 PM

You are definatley the master of the haiku, and I'm honored to have placed in your contest! Thanks Raul, it was fun! ~Trudy~

James Fraser

Date: 6/24/2009 2:33:00 PM

Raul, you just get better and better, apart from Nathan who writes really good Haiku's, if there are challengers out there - i want to see them match yours, darned hard task to do, again another great Haiku>>James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/24/2009 2:00:00 PM

yes i agree with what my brother chris just said--you should publish a book of haikus--i will definitely be the first to order it from across the pond---red stone,white crystals,and crimson colour with a rough edge--impressive Haiku-----charma

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/24/2009 2:00:00 PM

Sounds like a beautiful piece of nature you have you have blessed to see - God Bless, MJ

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/24/2009 1:04:00 PM

Another vivid haiku from you brother man...I would love to see you publish a book just on haikus.