Red Stone

Natural hue of earth,
Embedded white crystals shine;
Jagged crimson edge.

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Elizabeth Neal

June 27, 2009 at 10:19 AM

Nice, it paints a wonderful picture in my head. Good. Love Elizabeth

June 26, 2009 at 4:10 PM

Interesting images paint a picture with words in this poem. I like the use of color. Nice one! Karen

Sara Kendrick

June 26, 2009 at 9:41 AM

Like your Haiku. Sara

James Marshall Goff

June 26, 2009 at 3:17 AM

gorgeous! jim

Abe Lopez

June 25, 2009 at 8:28 AM

great job gangsta. you r the man!!!!!!

Carrie Richards

June 24, 2009 at 5:45 PM

Another winning haiku!! This is definitely your area of perfection!

Trudy Diane Rider

June 24, 2009 at 4:16 PM

You are definatley the master of the haiku, and I'm honored to have placed in your contest! Thanks Raul, it was fun! ~Trudy~

James Fraser

June 24, 2009 at 2:33 PM

Raul, you just get better and better, apart from Nathan who writes really good Haiku's, if there are challengers out there - i want to see them match yours, darned hard task to do, again another great Haiku>>James

Charmaine Chircop

June 24, 2009 at 2:00 PM

yes i agree with what my brother chris just said--you should publish a book of haikus--i will definitely be the first to order it from across the pond---red stone,white crystals,and crimson colour with a rough edge--impressive Haiku-----charma