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RED SOX 2018 WORLD SERIES CHAMPIONS !

Game 5 starts with a bang, a base hit then home run by Pearce right away
Red Sox are 2 to 0!  Go Sox – Yay!
Then the Dodgers come back with a home run on the 1st swing!
Making it 2 to 1, as their fan’s cheers loudly ring
Then a great double play and strike out stops them quick
Their momentum isn’t allowed to stick

Into the 2nd, Dodgers are on base but no runs come in 
Then in 3rd Dodgers on base again, fighting to win
Red sox come back in the 4th on base, but stopped too
Their great playing in the 5th, keeps Dodgers behind straight through

In the 6th it’s a Red Sox home run by Mookie Betts, as they rise!
It’s now 3 to 1 with another great home run surprise!
Great playing double play later keeps them on the top this night
It seems the red sox are focused on their goal in sight

Into the 7th can you believe?  This time Red Sox - Martinez - hits a home run!
And now the Red Sox are in the lead 4 to 1
Dodger’s good plays keep up the fight, nice
But Red Sox don’t let up, amazing pitching by Price

Then comes the 8th as they reach for their dream in the sky
It’s ANOTHER home run! 2nd for Pearce this night, as they fly!
Large crowds in Boston celebrate and rock the night away
Into the streets they gather and cheer this special day!

Pitcher Kelly enters the game, a strike out master
Brings the Red Sox closer to champs even faster
Into the ninth, pitcher Sale comes into the game
Finishing it off with a strike out into Red Sox Fame!!!

Red Sox are now World Series Champions 5 to 1
Pearce most valuable player award, with 2 home runs
The Red Sox fully earned their way to the top
An amazing team proving, no-one could stop!  
               CONGRATULATIONS SOX!

Heidi Sands

10/29/18

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Date: 10/30/2018 2:29:00 PM
Congratulations you did it again! Stunning dearest, Heidi!
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Date: 10/30/2018 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios! :)
Date: 10/30/2018 11:13:00 AM
Yay!
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Date: 10/30/2018 11:17:00 AM
Yes, Yay! Thank you Mike :)
Date: 10/29/2018 3:28:00 PM
My dear Heidi, it seems that you are Red Sox fan. I am very happy for you, but in reality there are bunch of big boys with millions of dollars hitting a ball.
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Date: 10/29/2018 4:14:00 PM
Hi, Yes, I am a Red Sox Fan. I enjoy it. Thank you for your visit. :)
Date: 10/29/2018 2:45:00 PM
I'm Happy for you Heidi, Congrats!! Happy Monday xxoo
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Date: 10/29/2018 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Mike. You are kind. I appreciate your support. Happy Monday :)
Date: 10/29/2018 1:00:00 PM
Congrats to Sox..and congrats to you Heidi. You are more than a fan, you are a true believer.
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Date: 10/29/2018 1:17:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. You are kind. They deserve it, well earned. I appreciate your comments very much :)
Date: 10/29/2018 12:30:00 PM
The Red Sox was the name my little league team used in high school...It was refreshing to read your take on the game...All the best Heidi
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Date: 10/29/2018 12:36:00 PM
That is a nice memory Arturo. Nice to hear your feedback. Thank you for your kind comment on this :)
Date: 10/29/2018 11:44:00 AM
Love this one too Heidi. I will reiterate, you should send your Sox poems to their organization. I don't think they would receive anything like this pack of poems. I think it would be appreciated. You never know what they may do with it. It's worth it to see what happens. Don't be shy. They certainly are good enough, better than just good, great! Good luck!
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Date: 10/29/2018 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra. I was more focused with reporting the facts , than poetic writing, but there is nothing to lose to share the poems with them. These would just need to be printed and sent. I appreciate your encouraging comment and all your support :)
Date: 10/29/2018 10:42:00 AM
Heidi, you should send this to The Red Sox. I'm sure they would enjoy it. Well done~Warren
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Date: 10/29/2018 10:55:00 AM
Hi Warren. I don't think it is that good, but it is a fun idea :) Thank you... I appreciate your comment. .. and the food for thought! :)
Date: 10/29/2018 10:25:00 AM
Wow, that was really nicely done Heidi. A poetic recap of the entire game last night, I don't think I have ever seen that done before. Bravo my friend. The better team definitely won this World Series.
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Date: 10/29/2018 10:36:00 AM
Thanks so much Chris. I have definetly never done this before, so it may not be that great of a write, but ....fun to do just the same. :)

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